I am a student goldfields primary this is a place where i will be
be able to share my leaning with you. please note....some work
won't be edit just my first drafts, so there may be some surface
errors. I would love your feedback and comments, thoughts and ideas

Thursday, August 27, 2020

Haiku

 Heart thumping running

 People passing -  its dreadful

 Sprinting to the end

1 comment:

  1. Hi Blake I like your haiku, but I wonder what it is about. Still it´s awesome anyway! The part I liked most was the third line because It´s a awesome word choice. I do wonder though when you will make another poem like this one!

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